Friday, May 14, 2010

तु होती तो



तु होती तो,
कुछ गुफतगुह होती /
इस अकेले की'
तु हमराह होती /

तु होती तो,
 तेरे होने का सुकुन होता, 
एक मीठा  एहसास होता /


तु होती तो,
कुछ गुफतगुह होती /
अनजान, सुनसान मन  के,
 गलियारों में अजीब सी मौज होती /

तु होती तो,
इन दबे खयालों को,
किसी और की जरुरत न होती /

तु होती तो,
 इस रूह की  हमसफ़र होती /

तु होती तो,
एक नजरिया और होता,
तु होती तो,
 मंजिलो की और राहे होती /

तु होती तो,
 ऐसा होता, वैसा होता,
पर कभी लगता है,
तु होती तो, 
क्या तेरे होने की इतनी चाह होती ? 




9 comments:

Uncensored Raj said...

tu hoti toh..pata nahin kya hota..magar agar tu nahin hoti toh yeah poem na hoti.....
thanx to her which led to generation of such a nic poem

Ankesh at Talk said...

@ Raj

thanx buddy...

yaar waise woh nahi hai tabhi ye poem hai..
wo hoti to tension hota,
par poem na hoti :)

MangoManBunty said...

o laale di jaan! dil jeet liya aapne!!

bahot bahot bahot touching!

Ankesh at Talk said...

@VKG

danyabad hujur.. bahut bahut sukriya :) :)

Nishit said...

Sahi dost tum to shayar waali line pakad liye aur ab to shraab bhi....galat line pakad li...jaldi se "VO" ko dhoond lo varna future tense dikh raha hai....awesome poem!!! Loved it!!!

Ankesh at Talk said...

@ Nishit

Thanx bandhu...
Yaar sharab to bas aise hi pi li.. lalat nahi lage gi :P :P

yaar wo milti nahi kya kare kosis to bahut ki... still eluded :)

vicious said...

a perfect cry of loneliness ..the pangs can be felt !!!

Ankesh at Talk said...

@ vici

yes dear.. actually I was feeling very lonely at that time.. n was wondering to call someone but was not sure who would be free to talk as all close friends are mostly busy at office... so poem is the result of longing in the loneliness :) :)

vicious said...

one of my reader has addressed his comment to you ... you might like to say something in response ...do find some time to drop by !!